The following questions all include one or two sentences with one error (either a grammatical error or awkward sentence structure). Please choose the response that best corrects the error and does not change the initial meaning of the sentences.
The following is an unfinished draft to an essay. Please read the draft and answer the questions that ask you to make edits to the writing.
1 When I arrived, I had an opportunity to swim with dolphins in the ocean. I spent two hours navigating the waters on the back of the animal’s slippery body—it was incredible. I’m sure that this kind of experience can only be enjoyed once in a lifetime.
2 Last summer, I traveled to Mexico with my family on vacation. The trip gave me a chance to learn about another culture and try out many new activities, including riding on the back of a dolphin and eating delicious Mexican food! The trip was unforgettable.
3 After riding on dolphins, my mom and dad took me to a colorful Mexican restaurant where I tried all different kinds of new foods, including enchilada, tortilla, and fajitas.
4 It was a delicious and stimulating meal. The world is full of so many interesting cultures that I think everyone should try to travel as much as they can. I know that I will continue traveling as much as I can. These kinds of experiences only happen once in a lifetime.
- 13．The current essay draft is very disorganized. If you could reorganize the order of paragraphs 1, 2, 3, and 4 to make the essay clearer, what order would you choose?